That was really good foreshadowing. I got the sense that one was the other’s ghost (or something) but it wasn’t overpowering. It was intriguing and kept me following the path.
Speaking of paths, I really liked the photographs of the Japanese alleys, I couldn’t really picture them based on my travel experiences.
I think my favorite part was that this spirit was able to be such a close companion to this troubled boy. I FELT that warmth and it was wonderful.
Amazing story. Thank you. Beautifully done. I did kind of figure out that they were each other. But the unanswered questions - why did this cycle begin? Can it ever stop?
That was really good foreshadowing. I got the sense that one was the other’s ghost (or something) but it wasn’t overpowering. It was intriguing and kept me following the path.
Speaking of paths, I really liked the photographs of the Japanese alleys, I couldn’t really picture them based on my travel experiences.
I think my favorite part was that this spirit was able to be such a close companion to this troubled boy. I FELT that warmth and it was wonderful.
Holy crap.
Amazing story. Thank you. Beautifully done. I did kind of figure out that they were each other. But the unanswered questions - why did this cycle begin? Can it ever stop?
I'll be thinking about this story for a while.