At first, I pictured you as the main character moving through the streets of Japan. This effect was highlighted by the extremely cool photos of real places. Way to weave worlds together Macy!
I had a paradigm shift when I realized who the POV character was. As a father, that struck close to home in many ways, and I found myself moving from 'observer' of someone else's story to 'participant.'
Here's an awesome line: "The lies tasted sweet as I spoke them but bitter when I finished." That's the good stuff, and why I am waiting for your next one.
I find myself waiting for each new story.
At first, I pictured you as the main character moving through the streets of Japan. This effect was highlighted by the extremely cool photos of real places. Way to weave worlds together Macy!
I had a paradigm shift when I realized who the POV character was. As a father, that struck close to home in many ways, and I found myself moving from 'observer' of someone else's story to 'participant.'
Here's an awesome line: "The lies tasted sweet as I spoke them but bitter when I finished." That's the good stuff, and why I am waiting for your next one.