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Dr. Timothy X Merritt's avatar

Thank you for the wonderful description of a place I may never visit (although now I may put it on my bucket list). A real treat, your descriptions never disappoint, "I felt like I had entered a liminal space in time."

I'm going to go off on a tangent on this reply, however. I noticed in the first section, you wrote in 2nd person, "You did this... you did that..." I encounter that a lot in multi-path adventure fiction. I know it's not your style, but keep an eye out for my next post where I will write about that in some detail.

Even though I personally try to avoid the second person perspective in my multi-path adventure writing, your use of it made me think you might want to try your hand at it one day.

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Flavio Massignan's avatar

I have been to Japan in 2019, and my favorite place in Tokyo is Ueno Park! I have been to Meiji jingu and it is a beautiful place, thank you for sharing with us your experience there!

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